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Ganna23 Deputy
Posts : 251 Age : 25 Location : In the deputy den (if there is one) or on the big rock outside of the camp.
| Subject: ThunderClan's Anger Tue Jun 09, 2009 4:07 pm | |
| Pinepaw looked at Shiverwing in shock. "But-" She started.
"Shush, little sister. Me and BlueTalon will heal him up." Twigpaw comforted. Twigpaw nudged Shiverwing. "Can you get up?" He urged. | |
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spottedstar FOUNDER
Posts : 238 Age : 28 Location : Thunder Clan's Leader's den
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Tue Jun 09, 2009 5:45 pm | |
| Spottedstar looked at Wildstar in rage."How could you?!"Then out of no where a war began.
Bluetalon looked at Twigpaw."Heal Shadowpaw like you healed Brambleclaw."He told him.He looked at Shiverwing and began Chewing up horsetail and spitting it in Shiverwing's wound,and pressing cobwebs to stop the bleeding.
Lionpaw bent down to his sister and growled, flinging himself into the battle.
Frostpaw attacked the nearest Shadowclan cat she could after seeing her sister.
Shadowpaw lay still as Twigpaw tended to her.Her wound still hurt fromthe blow Wildstar gave her, and all the pressing Twigpaw did made it hurt more but she didn't complain.She didn't have the strength to. | |
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wildstar Leader
Posts : 59 Age : 29 Location : in her den
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Tue Jun 09, 2009 5:53 pm | |
| Wildstar snickered at Spottedstar's foolishness,and whispered to her deputy."Do you see that apprentice next to Spottedstar?Kill it."Wildstar knew Spottedstar had heard it. | |
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rustclaw Deputy
Posts : 11 Location : shadowclan territory patroling
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Tue Jun 09, 2009 5:55 pm | |
| Rustclaw nodded.He believed her name was Pinekit, though,and he didn't like to kill but in the warrior code your leader's command is law so he jumped at the young cat, claws extended. | |
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Ganna23 Deputy
Posts : 251 Age : 25 Location : In the deputy den (if there is one) or on the big rock outside of the camp.
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Tue Jun 09, 2009 6:03 pm | |
| Pinepaw opened her eyes wide in fear. She dodged but the claws kind of scraped her side. She yowled and the attacked the cat with her jaws wide. She aimed for the neck. Pinepaw extended her claws, aiming for the other cat's sides. | |
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spottedstar FOUNDER
Posts : 238 Age : 28 Location : Thunder Clan's Leader's den
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Wed Jun 10, 2009 8:34 am | |
| Spottedstar rushed to Wildstar and tried to bite at her. | |
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wildstar Leader
Posts : 59 Age : 29 Location : in her den
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:19 pm | |
| Pain gripped at Wildstar as she tried to shake Spottedstar off her back,but to her vain it didn't work.Spottedstar had pushed her muzzle to the ground and Wildstar was quished.But Rustclaw still had a chance.Wildstar growled and jumped,and finaaly flung Spottedstar off,turned around and lunged at her. | |
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rustclaw Deputy
Posts : 11 Location : shadowclan territory patroling
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:21 pm | |
| Rustclaw dodged,but slipped in water as he fell he landed on his side and lost his breath.A little slower now, he got up and ran towards the young cat again,this time aiming for her neck. | |
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spottedstar FOUNDER
Posts : 238 Age : 28 Location : Thunder Clan's Leader's den
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:26 pm | |
| Bluetalon had finished with Shiverwing and rushed to Twigpaw as a Shadowclan cat stumbled forward,and bit her leg.She yelped and ran into Spotedstar.
Spottedstar turned in shock and clawed at the she-cat, forcing her to the ground.She let go and the shadowclan cat ran.Spottedstar then saw wildstar rush at her.She steadyed herself and jumped, flying over Wildstar.She landed on her tail, and hearing her yelp jumped into offense.Wildstar turned around and faced her, teeth bared.Spottedstar ran at her,preparing for her seceret move,knowing she would either run or dodge,she was ready. | |
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wildstar Leader
Posts : 59 Age : 29 Location : in her den
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:27 pm | |
| Wildstar jumped over Spottedstar,unfortanitly,Spottedstar was unusually bigger then most cats, and took this as an advantage. | |
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spottedstar FOUNDER
Posts : 238 Age : 28 Location : Thunder Clan's Leader's den
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:32 pm | |
| Spottedstar saw Wildstar jump and smiled.Stopping really fast, her paws skidded on the ground, and she jumped,twisting her body in mid-air,she got over Wildstar and spun around again so her feet were touching her back.Then,before they reached the ground she grabbed hold of wildstar's neck and flung her down,hard.As they landed Spottedstar landed on Wildstar and stepped off her gasping for air.The bad thing about her move.It takes a lot out of you.
(BTW people, me and Wildstar went over this on P.M.) | |
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wildstar Leader
Posts : 59 Age : 29 Location : in her den
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:38 pm | |
| Everything happened so fast after Wildstar jumped.First she sented spottedstar with her,then pain shout through her,then blackness......Wildstar gently opeded her eyes to see her dead mate, sadly looking at her. She got up and walked to him,heisitating, as she saw more of her appaered in the faint glowing outline. | |
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swiftpelt Deceased Ancestor
Posts : 6
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:42 pm | |
| Swiftpelt saw his mate and smiled,then frowned.That meant she lost another life.He sighed."you lost another life."He told her."six more and you'll be dead forever."He warned.The she-cat wasn't listening though she was to busy looking at herself.Good.He thought.A little fear will help.Untill he saw she was excited.He sighed again."I know you want to die, but will you promise me something?"The she-caat looked at him."Will you try not to die, and help your clan!?"He immediatly regretted those words when he saw the hurt look on Wildstar's face.He sighed again."Please just be carefull."Then he dissapeared. | |
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spottedstar FOUNDER
Posts : 238 Age : 28 Location : Thunder Clan's Leader's den
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:49 pm | |
| Spottedstar watched as Wildstar's breathing slowed down and then stopped.She is losing another life.Sopttedstar thought bitter;y, not caring after what she had done to her daughter.Herdaughter.She turned around and walked over to Twigpaw."Is she ok?"She asked. | |
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shiverwing warrior
Posts : 10 Age : 29 Location : Thundercan camp
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:51 pm | |
| Shiverwing limped out of the battlefeil, sad that she couldn't fight.She limped to the camp and went to the warriors den to rest.From the way she saw it after that awsome move Spottedstar just did,Thunderclan already won. | |
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wildstar Leader
Posts : 59 Age : 29 Location : in her den
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:55 pm | |
| Wildstar yowled her lost mates name again, as he dissapeared, then woke up to reality.Spottedstar was talking urgently to an apprentice and her clan has been chased out, all except rustclaw who wouldn't leave her side.She got up and shook her fur,then the pain came back.She yowled in pain,which got everyone's attention,and Sopttedstar came back over,fur bristling.Wildstar smiled cooly.I'm done here, I got to do what i came here for."Wildstar told Rustclaw,who nodded as they left.Afew Thunderclan cats spat and hissed at them but Wildstar didn't mind.Six more.She thought.Six more. | |
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Ganna23 Deputy
Posts : 251 Age : 25 Location : In the deputy den (if there is one) or on the big rock outside of the camp.
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Wed Jun 10, 2009 2:42 pm | |
| Pinepaw stared in shock. Their clan had won. She smiled in triumph. | |
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spottedstar FOUNDER
Posts : 238 Age : 28 Location : Thunder Clan's Leader's den
| Subject: Re: ThunderClan's Anger Wed Jun 10, 2009 4:31 pm | |
| Spottedstar looked back at Twigpaw."Is shadowpaw alright?"
Shadowpaw blinked the darkness out of her eyes and smiled at her mom."I-it's allright mom, i'm ok."
Spottedstar didn't take anychances though she turned to Bluetalon and asked him.
Bluetalon nodded his head."She is alright."He rasped."Twigpaw did a good job."He looked at Sopttedstar."Spottedstar?How many moons ago did these cats become apprentices?"
Spottedstar looked at the young cats.Of course since she was unusually big for a cat none of them were her size.But they were just about as big as Bluetalon and Shiverwing."I'd say about 4 moons ago."Sopttedstar said.
End of war. | |
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